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Paula Stephenson's avatar

I loved reading this short story by Victoria Axon, wishing it was a full novel. I was swiftly drawn into the characters and the detail was so good, I had the scene set very quickly in my imagination, making me read on and left me wanting more. I look forward to more stories from Victoria.

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Mo Steel's avatar

I really liked this Victoria, thank you. It was well written in every sense, interesting and cleverly structured. Very impressive!

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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Laura's avatar

Wow, loved this... :) Wrote your name down, hoping to see a book from you in print soon. I was totally immersed in the story, very well written - great idea for a story - thank you!

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Ron Whitfield's avatar

Once I started I couldn’t put it down. A very powerful storyline that masked the fact it will never become reality: or will it?!! Congratulations Victoria

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Virginia Shahid's avatar

Excellent!

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Ricard Kelly's avatar

I love this! Such a clever concept and brilliant execution. Looking forward to reading your novels!

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Beth Pipe's avatar

Love this story! What a brilliant idea, and well written.

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Tami Rose's avatar

Really enjoyed this story. This is a book I would read!

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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Corinna's avatar

Great idea, very cleverly structured plot, characters live through their actions, not through lengthy descriptions, I really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing! Would be nice to read more from you. Corinna from Stuttgart, Germany

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