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Helen L. Brady's avatar

I enjoyed it. Very unexpected twist - nicely rounded off. Chilling too.

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Deb's avatar

Very dark, but a very possible scenario, great writing

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Julia Hawkes-Moore's avatar

An elegant twist! Nicely written.

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Cathy's avatar

Elle, you pulled me right in. Evocative writing, great world building and then, the reveal! Loved it!

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