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Mo Steel's avatar

That was a blast! Absolutely keep on writing. I love the interweaving structure, (I don’t know how better to put it) It’s fast paced, funny, very clever, really grabbed my attention, and it’s riveting. Love it.

Joe Tetsab/Nick McD's avatar

Great stuff. I grew up about halfway between Gormire and Kirkbymoorside.

And yes, it is 'Whissun', as in the village Sutton under Whitestone Cliff.

You clearly know that part of Goddess's own county quite well!

Jo Jones's avatar

Very clever idea I enjoyed it a lot. Keep on writing 👍🏻

Fiona's avatar

Loved this, particularly because Gormire is in my neck of the woods. Haven't seen any dodos though...